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My Angel : Chapter 3

Title: My Angel 
Author: Kaori
Characters: Lily, Ken, Max, Anna, Ken, Sarah, Mr Kanzenai
Genre: Romance, Jealousy, Anger, Suspicious.
Summary: She thought he was the one for her but she was wrong. Someone else was waiting for her for a long long time.


At the entrance of Lily’s house, there stood Mercedes Benz. Inside a girl and a boy sat in front and looking at each other.

“So, that’s all for tonight.”

“I guess so, Max-sama.”

“Thank you.”

“Thank you? Why?”

“Well, for being my date this year.”

“I’ve been wondering since just now.”

“What’s that?”

“You’re famous in the college. You must have met many girls in your course and mine so why didn’t you choose anyone else but me?”

“You want the truth or the lie?”

“Hmm...Can I know the lie first?”

“Well, too many girls look so pretty and could say people can respect them.”

“So you’re saying that all the girls are disrespectable?”

“Well, one of it is the truth. Come on. You told me to tell you a lie and so I did. But the truth is not all are good and not all are as bad as they seems.”

“So what’s the truth?”

“Do still remember the first day you entered the college?”

“Yea. We had orientation.”

“Well, at first I thought you’re arrogant but when the last day of orientation, I noticed that you talk too much.”

“Well, it’s my hobby.”

“I realised that you were different from everyone. Whenever I see you during break, you’ll be smiling and enjoying you’re having lunch with your friends.”

“Well, it’s usual right.”

“It is but it wasn’t until the day I saw you rushing to the balcony of the college. Do you still remember?”

That moment it all came to her mind.


Lily just rushed to the balcony not caring what people thinking of her rushing like that. While running, she accidentally ran into a guy with Pharmacy logo attached to his shirt. Her books and papers fell. She quickly picked it up with the help of that guy. With a word sorry, she just went away.

“Is it tears that I’m seeing from her eyes?”


“Now I remember. It was you whom I accidentally ran into.”

“Yup and also I noticed your eyes were covered with droplets.”

“Was it? I don’t remember at all.” She does for it’s an incident she’ll never forget.

He just smiled at her.

“How did you know my name?”

“Well, since that day on, I  tried to find out your name. I just saw you first name so it helped me out to find your full name.”

“So that’s how you know my name. Hey! You haven’t tell me truth yet.”

“Well, it’s your eyes that made me to choose you.”

“My eyes?”

“Yes your eyes. It contains many secrete that makes me wanting to find out.” And slowly made his face closer to hers. “It’s very interesting.” and touched her face.

Lily on the other hand got nervous.

“Erm, I think I need to enter the house now. Thank you for giving a lift.”

“No problem.”

“Bye.” and rushed into the house.

He sat in the car smiling. Thinking of her reaction towards him.


At the party.

“Ken, are you alright?”

“Yes. Why are you asking?”

“You seems so tensed about something. Are you worried about someone?”


“Are you worried about someone?”

“No.” he smiled

“Are you sure?”


“Oh oh. Here comes the ‘eagle’.”

They turned toward the image that was coming towards them. It’s Prof Tense. He’s a professor who kind a likes Ken.


Who doesn't like Ken? Everybody does. He’s smart and has a good looking face that attracts all the girls in his batch. He has sea like eye lenses and a pointy nose. Cute lips that every girl wants and besides which girl doesn’t like guys with muscle? He’s all match for a girl. He’s rich but one thing that makes him hate by some girls like Lily is his arrogance. As a last first year student in Nursing, he doesn't care about anything at all. He always thinks high of himself and sometimes he acts as if he knows everything in life but is always beaten by Max, his senior but in Pharmacy. Well, one good thing is that he’s nice and kind deep in him. Ken get jealous easily but the only person he try to win is Max whom always wins.

Now let’s go to Max. To talk about Max, we should talk about his face at first. He has a hazel brown eye lens and cute small nose. He has sexy lips as Ken but they are small and could say that it’s the best lips for a kisser. His eyes are double layers and his eyes are so attractive that not a single person could take their eyes of him especially when he smiles. He's in his last second year of his Pharmacy. They come in package where he’s all perfect. He may be as perfect as Ken but most of all, he’s different from Ken. Besides, who wouldn’t want a guy with six pack and muscle at his arms? All is that he’s a dream guy for every girl. Even young teachers are attracted to him for he’s the guy to get. For he’s the natural respected guy.

Well, Ken and Max always competes in many stuff if Ken himself wants to. Ken may be a rough type but he’s nice in another side. As for Max, he’s all sweet and never wants to find any trouble for he’s the son of the person who owns the college. He faced many things himself but...anyway we’ll find out as the story goes along. Now, let us talk about Lily. She’s the very most important part of the story.

Lily, she's a freshmen of new first year student. She’s a chubby girl who has a sweet face. Double later eyes with black lenses. A face of an angel which takes the heart of every child. She loves children and animals but most of all she loves singing and creating poems. Her dream is to become a nurse for she faced many pain and suffering. She wants to cure them and put a smile on their face and now she’s there to achieve her dream. She’s a short-tempered girl as we read in the first chapter but actually, it’s not what you think she is. She may sound fierce but she’s the sweetest girl anyone who had ever met. She smiles to everyone whom she met or knows. It’s her usual hobby and to her, not everyone are as bad as they look until who get to know them even better. Let’s read and see what’s going on.


“Yes, Prof.”

“Well, Ken, are you alone?”

“No. No. I’m with my friends here.”

“Can I dance with you?”

“Erm, I’m kind a tired here. Why not bring him Prof? He’s a good dancer.” Pointing at Nick.

“No problem at all.” And started pulling Nick to his side. He just look at his betrayer.

Ken just sat there drinking wine and beer which was supplied. Minutes by minutes he kept on looking at the entrance and the time. Not sooner later, he saw Max walking in smiling alone.

“Is he crazy or what? Why is he laughing to himself?”

He quickly stopped Max who was walking to his side.

“Where did you went?”

“Well, why do you ask?”

“ANSWER ME NOW!” slamming the bear bottle on the table.

“He drank too much.”

“Ken, you need rest.”

“Ahhh! I don’t need your help. I can deal with myself. I stopped you to give you warning. Don’t try to disturb her or else you’ll lose her...” and he just walked a little until Max questioned him again


“You know her and don’t you ask me who isn't.” and went away.

“Why is he talking like this and who does he mean.” He shrugs his head and went away.


Lily slowly turned page by page looking for the thing she wants but then her so into interest didn’t made her realise that someone was sitting in front of her. As she slowly studied the content, the image looked at her slowly. She closed the book and jolted in surprise to see the image.

“Surprised to see me?”

“Max-sama! What are you doing here?”

“What do you think people would be here for?”

“Oh sorry about that. How are you?”

“I’m fine thank you. Taken you’re dinner?”


“Yea. Why?”

“It’s going to be evening already and you’re saying dinner?”

“Well, some people have their dinner during lunch and some during tea break. So, have I said anything wrong?”

“Well, it’s confusing me for sure.”

“Never mind. I was talking with my mum. She’s having dinner over there and that influenced me to ask you like that. Sorry about it.”

“It’s ok.”

“So, where are you planning to go later?”

“Go back home of course. I don’t have anything to do anymore.”

“Want to go out with me?”

“Huh? What?”

“Want to go out with me?”

“But... I...”

“Come on. For today only.”

“I’m sorry. I can’t. I have work to do and besides, I’m not used to go out with guys.”

“Well, think me as a friend then why guy?”

“Well, I can’t.”


“I can’t means I can’t.”

“But why?”

“Because you’re a guy and not a girl. If you’re a girl, I don’t mind going out.”

“Ok then, think me as a girl and then go out with me.”

“Well Max-sama, I don’t think I can you go out with you even if I think you as a girl.”


“Because your hormones are not so like a girl and you don’t have long hair or ....erm....”


“Nothing. It’s just that I can’t.” she stood up, pack her books and went to the shelf where she put her bag.

“But Lily, it’s just one date. One small date.”

“One small date? How small? As small as an ant?”

“Come on, Lily...”

She took her bag and started leaving but was stopped by him.

“Lily, please...”

“Are you always this stubborn when it comes to asking for date?”

“No. I don’t beg for dates. They comes by itself.”

“Good. I’m not in that list then.”

“Lily, I’m not putting you in that list. The reason I’m inviting you for a date is because I want to know you closer.”

“But this isn’t a good idea at all.”

“I want to know closer the year of my date.”

“So I believe that you must have done it a lot of times to your dates.”

“No. They’re the one who comes asking me. This is the first time I’ve ever asked a girl.”

“How am I…”

“Don’t give any reason. Please do say yes.”

“Why do you want to go out badly with me?”

“There’s something in you attracts me. So please say yes.”

“Ok, I will but another day and not now. Is it alright?”



“ But don’t forget it ok.”

“I won’t. Don’t worry, Max-sama.”

“But now, can you?”

“For what?”

“For me to send you home.”


“Come on. Don’t worry, I won’t bring you out for a date...”


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